DJ Cookies n Cream "Stand Up" - Misagh

Stand Up!
(The Spiritual Fight)


!! PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE LISTENING !!

For a while now, I've lamented that so much of today's hip hop and pop consists of phat beats and melodies, with absolutely trashy and ridiculous lyrics. I longed for the day when capable Baha'i artists could compose comparably phat beats with phat Baha'i or Baha'i-inspired lyrics to go with them.

Rather than wait for that day, I decided to take up the gauntlet and try my hand at using pre-existing beats and modifying the lyrics. Fortunately, I follow in the footsteps of other great hip hop remixers, such as Martin, Vafa, and the Dalai Rama himself.

The following is my first attempt at remixing a popular song with Baha'i lyrics. Please don't listen to it for what it is, but rather, for what it could have been, and hopefully one day, will be. Many constraints, including those of time, lack of availability of suitable voices, and lack of decent recording equipment worked to prevent this piece from becoming what I wanted it to be. Hopefully I will have an opportunity to someday re-record it, and bring it closer to what I wanted it to be from the start.

I like to think of myself as a poet at heart, so many of the lyrics operate on a superficial as well as a deeper level. There are several elements weaved into the piece whose import may not be immediately apparent (for example, why would I want female vocals to appear in the chorus? And why did I keep the same chorus lyrics as the original, while merely changing the order that the chorus is delivered?) If time permits, I would like to write a commentary to go along with this remix, briefly discussing some elements of the piece. Of course, I won't release that too quickly, lest I stifle your creative interpretations of my song.

This is my humble contribution to the 5 Year Plan. I dedicate this piece to the Universal House of Justice, whose timely wisdom acts as a blueprint for all of us 'spiritual soldiers'.

Enjoy!!

 

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LYRICS

TITLE: Stand Up (the spiritual fight) [Mees remix]


It's time to stand up, shoulder to shoulder, as soldiers of the Army of Light,

When you move, I move (just like that) x3
Stand up y'all, come on, yo, where you at?
When I move, you move (just like that) x3
Stand up y'all, come on, yo, where you at?

A new day has dawned,
can't you see,
It's_the_time_to_stand_for_justice and un-i-ty.
LSA, keep it real, and it's so sweet,
Now we've got representation from the BIHE,
YEAH!

We ain't got nothin' to worry about,
let it all go to shambles in fear and doubt,
it ain't my problem this world's a stinkin' mess,
on my mind is all about dressin' up to impress
HEY!

This is a war of words, spirit, mind and soul
soldiers of the light unite, the truth unfold
...Your armor is love and your food is the Word,
Now raise your voice nice and loud, forever be heard!

what's wrong with u'r mind, don't waste your time,
and your diatribe of spiritual's a dozen's dime
don't be fools, cherish your very sight and life,
I'm spiritual being? Hah, man, ya right...

<Chorus "...live the life..." ... I can taste all the hatred, disunity, and strife>

<Cut the music, use this time to talk> Step aside all those who are deaf and blind

This order has to crumble down, get outta-the-way!
We're moving closer to Baha'u'llah with each passing day,
We can choose to ride the Ark of salvation together,
Or get beat on by hate and prejudice's stormy weather

Let me take this opportunity (to) congratulate those,
who saw so many opportunities and chose and arose,
to champion this great Cause in the eyes of the world,
And withstand persecution, the Faith's Message unfurls

I, look-into-the-eyes-of-the-Abha blessed,
I see the power of the spirit-ual conquest,
of the planet, the Earth, it's within our grasp,
Let's spread divine melodies, let's spread 'em fast!

--Come on, we gonna party tonight!
We'll use mouth-to-heart, bring the planet to life,
Don't be 'scoureged, if your gift is not received,
Shake off the dust, u'r Divine duty relieved!

<chorus "....now's our chance..." ... Baha'u'llah has come, yo, get [stand] up and dance!>

Damn right all the haters wanna shut us down,
Put us down, so someone can extinguish our sound,
We were two Lights away from 27 letters,
Now we're using that knowledge to break free from the fetters!

Move over, Meesa's got somethin to say,
Do it now 'cause tomorrow ain't promised today,
Work with me, let's become One with God's Beat,
God's Will be done, the promise fulfilled, complete!

<chorus "I move wit'ch you...." "We all choose teams and I choose you...">
 

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FEEDBACK

Hey mees, whats up?  I just wanted to tell you that i admire your desire to make a change in today's hip hop and I think you're on a good start.

peace,
Nabil
 

Mees,
   Thanks for making Vafa and I look like monkeys. No really, you did a fantastic job on your rap and should be proud of your self on the one hand for raising the spiritual bar and on the other hand ashamed that you would deprive the world of your gifts for so long! You da man,

DJ Martin
MartinsQuest.com
 

Man! BIG UP! All the WAY!!! FAIZI FRESH GIVES HIS TWO THUMBS UP!!!! Listen, I gots to say, I sent the song to over 100 peepz. We will see how many more comments come through. Its good to see this kinda thing happen. Maybe we can stir up a Baha'i Hip Hop scene nationwide, and get peepz getting together, through the medium of hip hop, in order to share the Word of God to the rest of humanity. The Day of Light is here, where you at?

Faizi Fresh
aka Faizatronic
Queen City reprezent!
 

Haha...!  That's awesome man!!  Thanks for sending it to me.

Bayan M.
 

Well...
This song reached Mauritius Island!! Ya know Mauritius, little island in the Indian Ocean, in between Africa and Australia continents... ok u can hardly see it on world map! But we definitely exist.. so does the Faith, so does the Bahá'í Youth, and so does da Hip Hop!!
I'm forwarding it to everyone I know!! For sure!!

Really great job Mees, Hope u keep it up!! We need more songs like this to attract youth and to entertain our youth.. my 2 cents worth!! :)

Bahá'í Love!
Sabby
xoxox

http://groups.msn.com/BahaiYouthfromMauritius
 

Hey Mees, it waz good. I enjoy and good hip hop, R&B, Rap and Reggee tune. (so make some of those!) Anyways this one was amazing.

Sanaya   A.K.A LdDy VeNoM
 

WAH-GWAAAN!!! Big respect from paris!!
love ur flow man...keep it up...
PEACE

aNiS
 

Now this is phat

take care,
Habib  aka Habz
 

That's some great stuff right there!  Positive that you just created the bandwagon and soon it will be crowded with passengers!  ... the message was there.  Great stuff!  Keep on movin' and I hope for the best!

Eric K.
 

 

I ALWAYS BELIEVED IN YOU MEES
this phatness brings down tha hizzouse!
way to go

dan j
 

 

Nice! It was awesome, keep up the good work.

With Bahá'í love,
Anis Haji, Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada
 

 

Sweet job bro its great it gos great with the beat
peace,

panah
AK repersents
(Seriusly im from alaska)
 

 

this is the best Baha'i's rap song i ever heard....
good job guys...

Nima
 

 

very inspired lyrics...awesome.

Marjan
 

 

Nice! It was awesome, keep up the good work.

With Bahá'í love,
Anis Haji, Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada
 

 

It was great!

newsha
 

 

Hey Nice Job, Keep up the good work
You put hip hop in it some R&B some rap
nice touch man Your Flow is Good

Adeeb A.
 

 

Mees... That was AMAZING! Honestly, I'm speechless. It's a shame you didn't bless us with this earlier! I expect to hear more from you! Don't stop!

Much respect,
Nagin
 

 

Mees,
Nice work....it sounded good....so when's your CD coming out?

Kevin
 

 

Allah 'u' Abha.
Very well done, really enjoyed it, as I was downloading and reading the messages above I thought they are just being nice 'cause you are new to this but you did very well, sounds very professional.

With Aussie love.
Pash.
 

 

I was one of the few lucky people who got to hear mees' rap LIVE! It was great. Amazing job man at the first youth reflection meeting,

Justin B
 

 

Mees... That was AMAZING! Honestly, I'm speechless. It's a shame you didn't bless us with this earlier! I expect to hear more from you! Don't stop!

Much respect,
Nagin
 

 

1. I like your chest hair in that pic ;o)
2. Your song rocks dude!
3. You still haven't seen the video of my bro's wedding...your were an amazing dancer...i shall never forget...

Farshid@ Montreal/SouthSide.450
 

 

Wow.  You rawk!  :)

Habibi
 

 

MEES!!!! That was phat.... sooooooo amazing!! Much respect!!

Negar
 

 

WOW!!
It's all I can say
WOW!!

Navid
 

 

Mees, good work bro.  Put a little money into recording equipment and it might go platinum.  Maybe start an international fundraising effort. 

Good luck,
Jonas, Calgary, Alberta, Canada
 

 

That was tight...glad to see people taking an action for the faith...remember people religion is a way of life...

Congrats from Rio de Janeiro, Brazil....
Ary
 

 

That was stupid. :)

Mahtab
Editors note: This is Misagh's beloved sister.
 

 

Misagh,
I just have to say that I'm impressed. I love the lyrics!
It is truly inspiring.

Sarah H.T.
 

 

Hey bro damn that was phat bro wow man i'm shocked u didn't let me say a little suffin suffin hey hey

hey man like da rest of da comments have said bro dat was phat most perfect keep it up bro

herald mansoori ur cuz
 

 

MASSIVE! If you got more, lemme hear it! This song has now officially reached Sweden, maybe I'll play it at one of our reflection meetings or so :)
Take great care, and hope to see you soon! ;-)

Borna
 

 

Woah,
That is sick,
Your lyrics are phat,
Hip hop's the stolen medium,
You takin' it back!

Keep rhymin' the revelation,
Show this corrupted generation,
There's so much hate in the present day,
We gotta start givin' meaning to what we say.

So word to my man Misagh from the O-dot,
Love for every brother and sister, is what he got,
He's livin' the reason why Baha'u'llah came,
Peace to all the MCs who are doin' the same.

With mad respect,
Will 
 

 







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